I counted her freckles like rings
in a tree trunk, soft kissed by the sun,
and on particularly warm summer nights
I lose the number, finding myself instead
tracing her face, hinting at red,
burning as another day
fades gentle, another mark of beauty.
It’s Quadrille Monday at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets. Mish is hosting and asks us to include the word “freckle” or any form of the word in our Quadrille (a poem of exactly 44 words, sans title).
I like the tender romance of your quadrille, Philip.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome!
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There is something wholesome about freckles, especially when they grace the face of someone you love. Very gentle poem and peace-inducing to read.
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Wow–so many of us embracing the light side. Your piece is tenderness supremo, lovely as a tangerine sun kissing love sweat.
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Thanks, Glenn! Light jumped into my mind first.
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This is such a tender love poem.
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Isn’t that the best kind of love (poem)?
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oohhh this is beautiful!!
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thanks 🙂
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Wistfully romantic!
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A lovely piece, I can feel awe and mystery. ❤
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Beautiful 🖤
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has the feeling of a long love with the tree ring reference – beautifully tender
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Yep! 14 years and counting…
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That’s a wonderful perspective on freckle-ness Phillip. This made for a great read.
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I like how each day is a mark of beauty.
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Beautiful words of love.
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Tender as trees rings. Lovely 🙂
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Wonderful, loving read. For me, your descriptions in the last 2 lines really shine.
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You’re so kind! Thank you!
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Very nice. I like the comparison to tree rings and the phrase “soft kissed by the sun” made me think of each freckle representing a treasured moment, a sunny day. Sunny days of love!
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This is delightful Philip. ‘I counted her freckles like rings in a tree trunk’ 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful and tender! Such a delightful read.
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure.
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Gorgeous and tender
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