Sometimes I’d like to unpack
my soul and watch it pour
onto the ground, mixing with the dirt
and whatever lay before me, a new me
with constituent parts
that unmistakably resemble what was
but look tough,
simple.
Then I’d like to feel
this constituted mixture ooze
through my fingers, free of the bell jar
and doubts coming before me, now paramount,
with the confidence born
of foregoing our imposed dejection
and feel liberated,
me.
(c) Phillip Scott
I wrote this in response to two prompts:
Christine’s Daily Writing Prompt: The Bell Jar on Go Dog Go Cafe.
dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Mindfulness
Good for you!!!
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I like the idea of unpacking a soul. It gives the impression that you can remove and examine things.
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Wouldn’t that be interesting?
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It makes me wonder what certain parts would look like. Would some be old but comfy like an old flannel? Would some be softer than others? Do any of them carry memories of scents along with them that have become part of the very fabric?
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This is a very interesting approach to the prompt- I really like it. Thank you for joining in!
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Thank you!
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I like the thought of pour one’s soul on the ground.
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I so love the analogy. There’s freedom in doing this.
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Really love this Phillip
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Maybe you will by the time you are seventy! :>)
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Time will tell!
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Sounds possible–with the right assistance! I understand totally.
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Such powerful use of analogy here! ❤️
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This is very intriguing, the soul mixture oozing through fingers, the liberation from self-imposed dejection.
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This is very intriguing…..the soul mixture oozing, and liberation from our self-imposed dejection.
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Interesting metaphor!
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I love this. So much to take in and let “ooze”.
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Thanks so much!
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An interesting concept; I do not think I would risk it.
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