The clock prefers
a polite tree,
stretching
over time,
one more
ring with each
revolution,
content, marked
for the trouble.
The corridor reads
all mundane nameplates,
lusting
over time,
the future
unspooled before it
like ribbon,
slowly marking
time’s dance.
The flame pretends
it cares, ice
tickling
wax, alive
only now
indifferent to
ephemera,
acerbic mark
in time.
(c) 2019 by Phillip Knight Scott
Partially inspired by the Ragtag Daily Prompt – “acerbic“
WOWWWWWW, Good.
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All caps? Thanks 🙂
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Yep, means awe-struck 🙂
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Well you’re sweet
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I’ve been blogging for 8 years, and I notice most people who comment aren’t quite as dramatic as I am–my comments reflect genuine expression in real time. So if they seem over the top–they really aren’t, they’re sincere 🙂 🙂
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I like the image of time unspooled before it like a ribbon. Nice to see you at Poets United.
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful flow to your poem and a well-structured piece.
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Beautifully expressed!
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