Hot bottle in sand
clinging to its own message
no hope for escape
My first Haiku! In response to Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 141 #PhotoPrompt
Haiku #1 : Bottle
Hot bottle in sand
clinging to its own message
no hope for escape
My first Haiku! In response to Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 141 #PhotoPrompt
My name is Phillip. I live in North Carolina with my wife of 11 years and 3-year-old son, and at least for the next year, I’m on the right side of 40. I am a Tar Heel born and bred, and watch every Yankees game I can. My first collection of poetry, Paint the Living, Plant the Dead, is available now! https://amzn.to/2uNule7 View more posts
Well done on your first Haiku! There is still much unsaid in your words. I like that!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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