The bumblebee bounces in glory
upon my arm,
the unflinching stinger bold
in its daring attack,
bound in sacrifice
for its hive.
For what would I show such courage,
bounding into battle
without thought,
solider of hive mind
determination
for my tribe?
How might I fly to face danger
upon myself,
the urge to strike
against threats
determined
for my end?
What glory comes to the bee,
warrior with weight
of a planet on its wings,
no match
for the force
of my right hand?
(c) 2019 by Phillip Knight Scott
Written for the Poets United Midweek Motif – “glory”
Ouch! Both the questions and the force touch me where it hurts. Nicely done.
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Thanks! Hope it didn’t hurt too badly ๐
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The humble bee carries our future in its survival or lack of it. I love how you wrote about it.
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Thanks so much, Sherry! My uncle raises bees and he’d probably be horrified if I killed one. (No bees were harmed in the making of this poem.)
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Oh! This is wonderful!!
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Thank you, kindly ๐
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Very nicely written ๐
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Thanks ๐
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Well done! I really like โsoldier of hive mindโ and the last two lines. Thanks for sharing
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Thanks so much ๐
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I too keep bees. They are wonderful creatures.
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I would never kill a bee. Iโm real life.
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I used to be afraid of bees. Now I honor them. I love how your poem speaks of their bravery. I hope their natural courage is enough to not only save their queen, but save us.
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I don’t think they have a choice as it is queen, worrkers and drones and tney all obey the rules of the hive or get the push. Mind you the successful drone to mate with the queen doesn’t have much of a future!
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If bees thrive we survive. But few understand this. Love the phrase ‘solider of hive mind ‘ & this ode to the bee. Beautiful & timely.
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Thanks so much ๐
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I love your tribute to the bees
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Thanks so much!
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Well done! I stand in awe of these tiny creatures. LOL- My poem included a bee too.
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There must ‘bee’ something in the air this week.
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lol. Good one.
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Nice. But you know, if you struck it, it would win, in the end ๐ I’ve not been stung by bees so much as wasps. Yikes, they tag team a person!
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Oh yes – wasps are nasty. I do not mess with those buggers.
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Haha well. Am careful but sometimes they are pretty discreet! Hidden in a dracenae? Who would have guessed!?
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Also reading The Murmur of Bees by Sofia Segovia. You might enjoy it.
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I might have to check that out! So much ๐ talk.
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Seriously! Still, your post prompted it! ๐คฃ Hey, among other things, I am a mad landscaper and gardener. What else is there but the birds and the bees? ๐
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Haha. Youโve hit it exactly. Birds, bees and trees.
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I almost said that. ๐คฃ
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Great minds?
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Exactly.
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