Thoughts on waiting

Ambushed by the moon
reflecting a solar absence
while waxing poetic
behind fast swimming clouds,
we sit on the front porch
waiting.

A cool fall breeze
exclaims its presence, hinting
at a storm or other ominous things
just beyond the horizon. What surprises
lay before us, hoping to astound,
to break us
from an evening reverie
as we wait?

Wait, listening
to the remaining leaves
blowing above revealing that moon,
a marvelous wonder hinting
at a universe we know
nothing about.

We know nothing of what’s beyond
these leaves, this moon, mysteries
that baffle us, sitting, waiting on
our small planet,
an island amidst the nothing
of space matter.
Then the pizza shows up and nothing
else matters.


Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019

Posted for the dVerse Poetics weekly prompt : “anticipation”

Published by Phillip Knight Scott

My name is Phillip. I am a Tar Heel born and bred and watch every Yankees game I can. I'm still searching for my own TARDIS. My first novel, "The Alien in the Backseat," is available now! https://amzn.to/3oVCG77

25 thoughts on “Thoughts on waiting

  1. I really like this part,
    “We know nothing of what’s beyond
    these leaves, this moon, mysteries
    that baffle us, sitting, waiting on
    our small planet,
    an island amidst the nothing
    of space matter.”
    It evoked a vivid image of your description. The ending was just right.

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  2. I love that last line in relation to the rest of it. I wrestled with calling it juxtaposition or a non sequitur but I finally settled on something else: it’s human nature. We are in awe of the world but doggone it! We got to eat too!
    Great poem!

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