They say October has announced itself
in multicolored appendages
and mornings you cling close to your chest
even as trees drop all modesty.
Nature’s design has always been to promise
tomorrow’s potential even as revolution
leaves us tilted more closely darkness.
So we are marching through the elements
of time, the drums marking days
shorter though I know we will not
slow our tempo. An intelligent child
escapes persnickety leaves one at a time.
The tune this October remains hopeful,
crunching leaves underfoot
a momentary soundtrack. No one will slip
on wet leaves when pushed out of sight.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written with two prompts in mind:
- Poets United with a theme of “October”
- Putting My Feet in the Dirt with the theme “marching through the elements of time”
Phillip, this is an incredible piece!!! 🤗 Beautifully penned!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
The pleasure was all mine. You’re most welcome! 🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this line but do you mean “one” instead of “on”? – “escapes persnickety leaves on at a time”.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh my gosh I did – thanks so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re very welcome! Wonderful poem 😎
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like the idea we are marching through the elements. Love that October’s tune is hopeful. Yay!
LikeLike
I love this Philip how wonderfully create you have described the beginning of the new season. Visually stunning. 💕 love J
LikeLike
I like the atmosphere here… you have picked out the best part of October…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much!
LikeLike
This is wonderful rich in imagery!! 💖 Love it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much!
LikeLike
Nature’s music. I love the imagery, and the closing promise.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much 🙂
LikeLike
A couple of other poets mentioned those crunchy leaves underfoot too…I love that part of fall’s “momentary soundtrack”! What a great way of putting that.
Gayle ~
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you thank you, Gayle!
LikeLiked by 1 person
We both had wet leaves on our mind today, but your poem wins! It’s lovely!
LikeLike
Beautiful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome!
LikeLiked by 1 person
… trees drop all modesty … I really like that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Margaret 🙂
LikeLike
Interesting take on my favorite season. Good job.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
The drums marking days shorter. That is definitely the way October feels, the changing beat and rhythm of the season. everything slowing down.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading!
LikeLike
This is a wonderful October poem, Phillip. You had me at that well-written first stanza.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh thanks so much! 🙂
LikeLike
Love the crunching leaves. Nicely done.
LikeLike
A perfect description of October, Phillip!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome! 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person