What to say of a marriage
well worn? She’ll dive into a coffee
pot this morning, swimming
into another day as hours do laps
around the clock.
Her eyes – from what I can see –
refuse to accept the daylight,
fighting a battle she’s lost before but,
ever hopeful, lashes out once more
against the sun.
I place a hand on a coffee mug and
pledge allegiance in whatever wars await
after her hair is dried and our son
once again demands we mix
water and milk.
For a few minutes, we are a couple
embracing small moments crackling
with sparks the same they have
all these years even as the clock dances
through another day.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written with two prompts in mind:
- Poets United Midweek Motiff : “everyday living”
- dVerse Poetics : “profiles and portraits”
Love! The picture emerges of a close-knit joy.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Sweet.
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Thanks!
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That is what makes love that last, a sweet way of sharing the honesty of a lasting marriage.
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I think that when you take the time to notice every moment is precious… lovely
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I love that the spark is still there in the everyday routines….wonderful.
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Thanks 🙂
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How important it is to enjoy every day if possible which in future you can look back on them and say “Our lives were so beautiful we are so lucky”.
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So true 🙂
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I like the clocking dancing through another day at the end.
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coffee and routine and shoulder to shoulder facing the world. I understand this. Nice poem!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Beautifully penned.
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Recreating those sparks repeatedly is what makes this love special!
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Well spotted!
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I really, really like this. Seams to hint at some rifts in the darkness and light that combine to something beautiful.
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Thanks Rob 🙂
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It is the small moments that make a marriage last. Beautiful writing Philip.
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Thanks so much!
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I love these lines, Phillip:
‘For a few minutes, we are a couple
embracing small moments crackling
with sparks the same they have
all these years even as the clock dances
through another day.’
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Thanks so much, Kim!
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This is precious — the profile emerging from these observations provide a glimpse into the person as well as the relationship. Very well penned! 🙂
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