They found forever among the Froot Loops,
halfway between Frosted Flakes
and immortality in that special spot
under the lasting look of a toucan and tiger
eyeing whatever future spills
in colorful milk poured before them.
When they once again crossed carts
in the frozen aisle of Eggos
and perpetual loneliness, they let go
of forever – it now tasted stale,
iced over and bland. No amount of salt
and preservatives could save them.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Victoria is today’s host of dVerse. “Browse a grocery store or mall, looking for art in the ordinary and use that for inspiration. Art is all around us.“
Nice contrast with immortality in the first stanza and the need for preservatives in the last.
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Thanks so much, Frank, and good catch 🙂
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Really enjoyed the grocery store encounters in this, and the contrast between fiction and reality. Nicely done, Philip. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks, Victoria! It was fun!
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It was fun to read too!Great little flash of fiction- the shaallowness of the encounter underlines
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I enjoyed this. The comparison of the future spilling like milk and the description of the products and the aisles were noteworthy.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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A small, everyday tragedy. Lovely balance between the stanzas – even the way things start with breakfast and end with too much Eggo/ego.
What is Eggo????
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Thanks so much! https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Leggo%20my%20eggo&=true&defid=906188
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Gee, I thought salt and preservatives saved everything!! Your poem is very clever and amusing!
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Thanks 🙂
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