I crept through the room
shadows balancing themselves
while slumbers stitch dreams
maybe vacant and thoughtless
I woke her up nonetheless.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written for Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 148 #SynonymsOnly : This week we had “space” (room) and “empty” (vacant).
A Tanka follows the 5/7/5/7/7 syllable structure. A Tanka consists of five lines written in the first person.
Oh, I loved the last line. Well done, my friend. This is great! 😀
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I hope you woke her gently’….. I enjoy your little finale…..
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