There’s not enough coffee in the pantry
to poison the nightmare flower
growing inside my mind this Monday morning –
a menacing thought blooms in shadows.
What phantoms creep in darkness,
wakeful vigils watching
through keyholes while moonless skies sway
then give way
to the quiet sun cheering for someone to hear?
The sun is too loud.
She dropped the seeds in my ear while I was sleeping
then evaporated, leaving me
a farmer diluted, hosing my brain with
caffeine while my wetter winks paint sorrow
in neat rows not yet tilled.
What blossom sprouts in dejection,
rotten and unwanted
I sit wishing the sun would retreat or retract
or simply retrace its steps in reverse?
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Submitted for Christine’s Daily Writing Prompt : “Nightmare flower”
Written for Sunday’s Whirligig 235 : keyhole, hear, menace, sleeping, phantoms, swaying, cheer, creep, wetter, quiet, winks
Submitted for dVerse Poets Pub. Lillian asked for treats … though this may be more of a trick?
Splendid and so visual. Love Joni
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A typical Monday morning around here… Wonderfully described!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Love it.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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WOW, this blew me away–impressive, strong writing.
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Wow – thanks so much 🙂
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Most welcome, Sir 🙂
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Whoa. Awesome!
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Thanks 🙂
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I like this a lot… the nightmares, the Monday morning… and then I have to say it reminded me of Baudelaire…
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Thanks, I think?
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Those damn Blue Mondays, always waiting for us, like a school bully, and like a nightmare weed, it regrows in the same spot every week.
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This makes me think of awaking nightmare, waiting for sleep to take it all away.
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oooooh…..a new take on an “ear worm”! Oh yes……..coffee to drown out the ideas planted in our brains….a loud sun that awakens the negative thoughts. Nightmare flower indeed.
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Thanks!
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Nice description: “hosing my brain with
caffeine while my wetter winks paint sorrow
in neat rows not yet tilled.” Best wishes.
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Thanks, Frank!
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sounds noxious and painful. May its blossom last only a day.
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such an impressive line – the sun is too loud. And I know others have already remarked on this but your whole weaving of the nightmare morning with coffee speaks volumes:
“hosing my brain with
caffeine while my wetter winks paint sorrow
in neat rows not yet tilled.”
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That’s very nice, Laura. Thanks!
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Beautiful writing
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The sun is always too loud and there is never enough coffee on a Monday morning…(K)
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Agreed!
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The idea of poisoning the poison is very original and thought provoking.
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Thanks so much, Christine!
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I got a little nervous about the seeds in your ear. Smiles. Well done!
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Ha! Thanks 🙂
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What vivid writing!
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Thanks so much, Rosemary!
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This is very strong writing. The poem to me is an extended metaphor of the dark workings of the mind. Thoughts and images plague me often, and so, I can relate.
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Thanks so much, Nitin. I think it’s something we all suffer from, though we don’t always like to admit it.
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On my second cup right now, but….that damned sun…
(My meager pantry poem is also about sunrise this week.)
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