
The snow breathed heavy that day,
a jolt of icy white confetti celebrating
winter’s return. Paralyzed by the cold,
we watched, transfixed by the beauty
and ferocity, as winter played out
its first act. Dazzled by the scene, I reached
as if called, for the cold,
the glass chilly and inhospitable
on my fingers as I tapped myself
into the performance.
A stag, startled, heard my intrusion
and stared at us, a spark of terror
in his eyes, hoofs frozen in fluffy earth.
Nothing moved as he stood
staring in a stupor as snow and tree limbs
cascaded around those antlers, majestic
and stock-still. What bravery to survive
the savagery spitting numbing flakes
on a naked face.
Just as suddenly he stirred from his bluff
and disappeared behind the stormy curtain,
forever relieving me of his second act.
And I, roused and staring only at
my own reflection in the poorly insulated
window, resolved to buy some weather strips
and better protect myself from
nature’s cruelty.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written for Sue Vincent’s Thursday photo prompt : “calling”
You’ve wowed me again, my friend!
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Very well penned. You can almost hear the susurrus of the falling snow… feel the palpable frozen moment before the muted crunching of snow muffling the bounding thump of the stags hooves.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Oh wow, Phillip… this is marvelous! I love this style of poetry! Beautiful written.
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Thanks so much, Tara 🙂
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I love that first line, Phillip.
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Loved the motifs in this one!
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Thanks so much! And also: love the name 🙂
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