My murky memory extrapolates the smoke,
pixelated recollections somewhere in the cache
that clears itself (a grasp slackens)
as I hasten to replace lost echoes
with reminiscences to come,
not forgotten among the ash,
rising breathless if we dare stretch.
The future — always fuzzy like sleep
that won’t rub out of our eyes — changes
every time we look at it, as we push forward
carrying the momentum of those better angels
urging us to grow our own wings
and launch ourselves to join those
refusing to leave progress to others.
Time will tell what tales we create,
proceeding weightless where we dare.
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written for Go Dog Go Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge (leaving) and Free Verse Revolution’s December Writing Prompt #1 (time will tell) and dVerse Poetics “Less is more, more or less“
That last line is superb. Bravo!
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Thanks so much, Linda!
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I read this as a poem about parting… the future as sleep that won’t rub from the eyes is excellent
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Thanks!
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The future — always fuzzy like sleep
that won’t rub out of our eyes — changes
every time we look at it, as we push forward
I love that – it’s so true. I like the movement through time, from past to possible future – and your ending is hopeful, as requested. Lovely word choice.
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Thanks! Yes, it’s hopeful – we need only try and we can make of the future what we want
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I like the verve of this one.
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I appreciate that, Jane! I like that word “verve”
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🙂
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Looking to the future you offer up hope and you have chosen two of the lightest of being ‘less’ words
Love these lines
“ carrying the momentum of those better angels
urging us to grow our own wings ”
Thanks for joining in with the promot
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I enjoyed your poem, Phillip. Loved that last line!
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Thanks!
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I love the idea of memory as a thing that hasn’t happened yet.
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Fuzzy like sleep that won t rub out of our eyes…Wow! Love this and the rest!
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Thanks for loving the rest!!
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I love looking at the future that way! Instead of looking at it hopefully and with clarity, you view it as we should, cloudy, hazy and who knows? 🙂💕
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Exactly!
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Strong imagery and an unusual look at the future, Phillip. I enjoyed the shift in perceptive and the lines:
‘My murky memory extrapolates the smoke,
pixelated recollections somewhere in the cache’
and
‘The future — always fuzzy like sleep
that won’t rub out of our eyes — changes
every time we look at it…’
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Thanks so much, Kim 🙂
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This has some great alliteration, especially:
“as I hasten to replace lost echoes”
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Thanks 😊
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Your best work yet.
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I don’t know about that but thanks
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Would you allow as far as I have read. What do you believe is yours?
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Great poem, I LOVE the final 2 lines.
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“as I hasten to replace lost echoes
with reminiscences to come,”
These lines are outstanding, Phillip!
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Thanks so much, Kristiana!!
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Very well written!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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