
As I leap into middle age
(knuckles white)
I wonder if the greatest adventure
is merely to breathe
(snow meets altruistic land)
In a world spinning its wheels,
(frigid morning scrubs icy)
the eager sound can’t whine for change,
stale taste of winter
(skin burning with the chill)
The calendar will jump to Spring
(teeth rattle loose)
anticipation blooming every dewy night
I snore away
(gray hair wind-blown)
Phillip Knight Scott | © 2019
Written for Sue Vincent’s Thursday photo prompt: Chill #writephoto as well as Free Verse Revolution’s December Writing Prompt #2: to breathe.
Submitted for the dVerse Poetics Pub Thursday OpenLinkNight #256.
Love the two intertwined threads here, Phillip…and empathise with them too!
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Thanks so much, Sue!
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Really nicely done Phillip. Enjoyed this a lot.
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Thanks, Tom!
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“In a world spinning its wheels,
(frigid morning scrubs icy)
the eager sound can’t whine for change,
stale taste of winter,”
…this is so powerful!
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Thanks so much!
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I do want the calendar to jump to spring already. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks, Grace!
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love the images you used to show the turning of time. spring! who doesn’t love it!
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Thanks for reading! 🙂
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A beautiful ode to age using Winter as its central theme. I enjoy how you’ve woven two poems here into one (like e.e.cummings)
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Really effective and visceral write Phillip, I really enjoyed it. Thank you…
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That’s great to hear! 🙂
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So much to like about this poem, Phillip; I especially like the asides in parentheses and the hope in the calendar jumping to Spring and anticipation blooming.
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Thanks, Kim 🙂
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Good point that the greatest adventure is to breathe.
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Thanks, Frank!
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Excellent, as always.😊
🎄Wishing you and your family a wonderful New Year!🎄
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So nice of you as always Geraldine 🙂
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A very well written poem. Loved reading it.
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The calendar says winter won’t start until the 21st, spring seems so far away. (sigh)
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Winter is not here yet… it will come when it comes.
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I’m closing my eyes, and wishing the calendar jumps to April.
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Ah, the joys of aging. Well done Phillip.
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I am well past middle age and well rooted in winter. There is much joy in the pain of body trying to keep up with the dance.
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Beautifully evoked, both physically and emotionally.
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I enjoyed this so much. Still, I chuckled a bit at the thought of your aging – I’ve already aged and hope to age some more. Living is living at any age. All of life stages can be rich and rewarding. Good luck on your book!
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Love the intertwined poems and I can relate to the loose teeth and grey hair…
I wish I was on the right side of forty…
That said I love my life!
Anna :o]
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