Without realizing it we shrink our world
until it fits inside a box
and things left outside find ways
to poke holes in our reality.
Nature abhors a vacuum
and my floor is a mess.
I can’t stand dirt
clinging to my beige carpet.
© 2021 Phillip Knight Scott
At dVerse this week, we’re writing a Quadrille using the word “stand”
Sing the praises of the vacuum!
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Hear hear!
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And if it keeps raining, the box will make a p*ss-poor boat!
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Love love love the imagery here, Phil. We are so limited by our own perception and perspective, the world is simply what we allow it to be and how it plays out is almost like an interpretation of the sorts–that is until reality slips in and we’re exposed to something much more daunting than what we originally thought. Beautifully and evocatively written! I’ve missed your presence on WP and dVerse.
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Thanks so much, Lucy. You are too kind 🙂
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Ease to stay within our own comfortable space, but there’s so much life out there to slip in. Enjoyed the imagery and metaphor.
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Thanks 🙂
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Sooo true Phillip!
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I like this clever take on the prompt.
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Damn. I wish I’d come up with those lines, Phillip. They’re inspired.
❤
David
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You are so kind — thanks for the kind words 🙂
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Love the way you ended this Quadrille! My first born lives in RDU and we are inveterate Yankees fans!
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This is a really great piece. I am glad to see you showing up on my reader again. Hugs 🤗 Joni
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It’s very clever the way you actually shrink the world down within the poem until it fits inside a vacuum cleaner!
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Thank you so much, Ingrid!
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