The lyrical sun met the day hopefully,
a low trill softly rising like the hum of footsteps
just beginning to fall on the hillside,
forgotten in the night.
Alone, the daylight has a habit of dancing too early,
crimson arrows playfully puncturing our reverie —
when we were content behind the shade
of window curtains and bedsheets.
The idiot insults the sun — star of its own story —
but it won’t ruin another night by bouncing cheerily
into ours. If we can’t move, I’ll march the day
forward and circle back to you.
© 2021 Phillip Knight Scott
Written for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Photo Challenge. Check out that picture! (Trapping the Sun, @Pobble365)
Nicely penned! Some vivid imagery indeed. I love the line “ crimson arrows playfully puncturing our reverie”
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Thank you kindly!
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Beautiful piece!
I love these lines,
“Alone, the daylight has a habit of dancing too early,
crimson arrows playfully puncturing our reverie —“
❤️🤗
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‘lyrical sun’
Love this! 🌟
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Thanks so much 🙂
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