She appeared in my life, brilliant light
I thought an ephemeral dream
beyond my reach or, worse, destined
to disappear over the horizon
but she refused to be a shooting star
and instead burns in the daylight,
gleaming in grooves long in the dark.
© 2021 | Phillip Knight Scott
For dVerse #135 Shake That Poem Groove Thing. Also utilized the Word of the Day Challenge: “daylight“
This is so visual, I can see it! Wonderful.
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Thanks so much : )
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That was a lovely piece. What a beautiful surprise for the sky. Very visually stunning. ❤️🤗🦋
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I so agree with Joni. Stunning, Phillip.
❤
David
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❤️hugs to you and your family.
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I’ve read this a few times now and can see it in a few different ways. Good wordsmithing, Phillip.
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Lucky you! A brilliant light that grooves far into the night!
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Thanks so much, Bev! I am very lucky!
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“gleaming in grooves”
I love that.
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Oh, when they stay, everything’s brighter, eh?
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It really is!
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How immersing!
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Thanks, Lucy!
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OMG she us daylight itself
“burning in grooves”
Bravo
Much💛love
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Thanks so much!
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How lovely!
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful poem. I like how it can be taken in different ways.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Another nice one, Phillip. 🙂
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Thanks, Bill!
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You’re welcome, Phillip.
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A gorgeous Quadrille … declaration / description of love.
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Thanks, Helen!
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She refused to be a shooting star instead she will continuously shine on. pure poetry
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Thanks so much 🙂
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“She refuses to be a shooting star” — so much meaning can be wrapped into those words!
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Thanks for unwrapping them!
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It’s the light in darkness we need the most.
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Very true!
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