You’re always cold, rosy cheeks trying
to escape another freeze or, like
a mermaid on shaky ground, limping
to your hiding place behind boxes of fate.
Fortune moves at a constant speed
regardless of temperature, though we may
feel warmer when a clock’s hands
share space with ours inside wool gloves.
As you shiver from that chill brought on
by anxiety or mysteries of the universe
too considerable to convincingly consider,
I’ll swivel you (wearing plaid designs
on our future together) around in my warm
embrace, reddening from a warmth born
of spinning hands keeping perfect time
as we retreat to privacy — finding our own tempo.
© 2021 | Phillip Knight Scott
Written for dVerse’s Poetics: from a place of pain.
Other prompts:
- Go Dog Go Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Do NOT use “the” or “and”
- Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie’s Wordle #261 :

“I’ll swivel you (wearing plaid designs“
I love that line.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I love how you can bring comfort to each other…
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That’s the goal!
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Nice weaving of their complementarity.
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Thank so much 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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We find comfort where we can, and are most fortunate when it’s right there beside us.
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For those of us lucky enough!
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This is beautifully evocative. I especially like; “I’ll swivel you (wearing plaid designs on our future together) around in my warm embrace.” 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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The use of temperature and time was creative in this, I got the warm fuzzies at the end!
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Thanks so much, Tricia!
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A beautiful evocation of love and healing. I love the observation that ‘Fortune moves at a constant speed
regardless of temperature,’ There’s only really time for love.
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Very true! Thanks for reading 🙂
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An embrace is always a good bulwark to fear. (K)
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Love the hot and cold and tidy timing mixed with impromptu. The balance of the metronome, and our need for pain and pleasure. Much enjoyed.
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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This is just beautiful.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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In the arm of a lover the pain subsides. Nice one
Much💜love
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Thanks!
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What a lovely symphony!
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Beautiful writing, Phillip! It gave me a warm, cozy feeling.
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There is a strong sense of togetherness against the odds in this one.
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