I can almost hear the rhapsody of stars
singing of a hunter whose belt
cinched tight holds the sky above
my head rests uneasy
a frosty mask dotted with stardust
remains of something once
significant, other matter occupies
my mind struggles starlorn
the universe is expanding, adding
infinity to forever & the song
is swallowed in the earth’s atmosphere
© 2021 | Phillip Knight Scott
Written for dVerse’s Poetics: The Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows. I chose Starlorn: a sense of loneliness looking up at the night sky, feeling like a castaway in the middle of the ocean, whose currents are steadily carrying off all other castaways.
Other prompts:
- GoDogGo Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: frost, mask, significant other
- pensitivity101’s Three Things Challenge #812: belt, rhapsody, sing
Adding infinity fo forever… so true… we are drifting apart, expanding
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I find it hard to conceptualize that space is both infinite and expanding … hurts my brain
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Fabulous use of the word! Thanks for joining us.
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Thanks so much Linda 🙂
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Another lovely offering Phillip. Thank you for the inclusion.
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Thanks so much!
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Deep…wide…eternal thought……thought-provoking poem…
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Hard not to think wide when it comes to space
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This is absolutely stellar writing, Philip! 😀 I love; “a frosty mask dotted with stardust remains of something once
significant, other matter occupies.”💝💝
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I see what you did there with “stellar.” Thanks 🙂
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So lovely and profound!
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Thanks Lucy 🙂
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Great take on our limited, temporary existence relative to the universe. Love this
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Thank you!
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Nice piece Phillip. I really like this. Big hugs. 🤗
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Thanks so much Joni! Hope you’re having a great week back!
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You are very welcome Philip your work is lovely. It is great to be back. Hugs to you and all those you love. ❤️❤️🤗
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‘my mind struggles starlorn’ – I love this phrase! Sometimes I feel like that. But the whole poem is mind-expanding.
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Thanks so much, Ingrid!
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*appreciative applause*
❤
David
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Thanks so much!
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Really enjoyed this poem, especially the word “starlorn” and the “adding infinity to forever.”
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it : )
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Stunning poetry, Phillip…starlorn as the night sky!
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I really appreciate that, Lynn. Thanks!
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Really luv this starlorn contemplation. And especially the last verse is my favourite
Much💟love
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Thank you so much Gillena!
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You really put this prompt word to good use! Well done.
Pax,
Dora
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Thanks so much 🙂
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a cool photo, and a pen to honor it. ~
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