December refuses to jump
fully into Winter, thin strings of green
poke through hollow white snow
stretch toward aching gray skies
trying to swallow the Earth.
Another year beckons us
with resolutions to stretch
like a sapling discovering brighter spaces
in a slowly graying world.
The world revolves around love
each orbit brings seasons
of color and flavors
too potent to survive
alone — I taste the cold
metallic daze hidden in clouds
the world unfocused
until the sunrise
lights her face
reds replace gray
she sees me again.
© 2021 | Phillip Knight Scott
Written for dVerse Poets Pub “Kwansaba & Blessings.” This is a response to “Blessing for the Light” from The Bell and the Blackbird by David Whyte
Prompts:
- Ragtag Daily Prompt: hollow
- Fandango One Word Challenge: bring
- New2Writing #writephoto: Snowy Peaks – Image by KL Caley
I feel the same now… December started very cold, but now it’s just grey and wet… we now that it’s close to turning though,
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Those last 4 lines won me over. They are beautiful literally and as metaphor.
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what a delightful read Phillip, you’ve woven earth and seasons so skilfully with a clincher at the end!
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This is absolutely stunning, stunning in its depth and imagery, Philip! 💝💝
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I love that last 4 lines – gorgeous imagery!
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Thanks, Grace!
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Excellent write. Rich with feeling. Happiest of holidays to you and yours my friend, and every blessing in the new year Phillip! 🙂
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Thanks so much, Rob! All the best in the season!
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I felt the stretch into brighter spaces here, enjoyed this! Wishing you happy holidays! ❄
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Thanks, Tricia! Same to you : )
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Such beautiful and evocative imagery. I felt like I was coming up from out of the water and am now only breaking the surface to finally see, and see what? These few lines:
“until the sunrise
lights her face
reds replace gray
she sees me again.”
Swoon. This is such an amazing poem, but that final stanza, damn what a closer. Nothing beats it!
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Thanks so much, Lucy! I’m so happy you made it to the surface!
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This is really beautiful Phillip. I love the hope and light at the end. Beautifully written my friend. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Joni! What else is there in the end but hope?
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We must hold on to our faith and hope. Love ❤️ Joni
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A beautiful poem of nature’s cycle . Happy Christmas 🎄🎄☃️💜
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Thanks so much 🙂 You too!
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I admire the photo and the idea that “the world revolves around love”.
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Thanks Lynn!
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Wow, what an interesting poem. I really like how you’ve captured the seasonal changes. Thank you so much for taking part in
KL ❤
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Thanks so much 🙂
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You answered the prompt so well!
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This is gorgeous, Phillip …. Sending greetings and Holiday joy your way!
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Thanks, Helen! Joy to you and yours!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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Those last lines are beautiful
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How beautiful, Phillip!
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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