There’s something arch
in my muse, the way
she can arrest me
with a particular turn of her lip
like a wind-spattered umbrella twists
so rain tastes my face.
She playfully wipes me
dry & I have to laugh
at our dewy inside joke.
© 2022 | Phillip Knight Scott
Written for dVerse Quadrille #143: Muse Cues. I also incorporated pensitivity101’s Three Things Challenge: abstract, arrest, arch, Word of the Day Challenge (particular), and Ragtag Daily Prompt (spatter).
I love how your muse may tease you…. that has the to be the best kind of muse.
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It’s always fun to have a playful muse. Why so serious?
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This is breathtakingly beautiful, Philip! I especially like; “with a particular turn of her lip like a wind-spattered umbrella twists so rain tastes my face.” 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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This poem gets delightful so quickly, those last lines are brilliant, of course all are, just develops so well…
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Ha! I love the playfulness in this!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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I completely agree with sanaarizvi, there is such beauty in this quadrille. A lovely, lovely poem. “like a wind-spattered umbrella twists / so rain tastes my face” becomes one of those moments that you can feel as a reader.
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Thanks so much, Carol! Glad you could feel it (though I hope you don’t get rained on)
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Ah, well I grew up on Shropshire so rain is pretty much the only weather I know. 😜
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Then I hope you have a trusty umbrella!
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You are blessed with a bonded and playful muse! Wonderful quadrille.
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I am indeed – thanks!
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Is she free for drinks anytime soon? Quadrilliffic!
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Ha! Depends on who’s buying
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This is really lovely your muse is working for you Phillip.
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Thanks so much, Joni : )
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My pleasure really enjoyed it. ❤️❤️
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Sounds like you muse likes to have fun!
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Indeed!
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How beautiful, your curvaceous muse. She taunts and teases you but gives you what you need. This one was fantastic.
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Thanks so much : )
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Most welcome.
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Oh Muse is a tease and a joker, indeed. I like this.
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The best kind of muse I think!
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Lovely muse quadrille.
Happy New Year
Much love…
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Thanks so much Gillena!
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Phillip, this may be my favorite of the “muse” quadrille poems I’ve read. I love your imagery.
-David
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Thanks so much! That is so nice : )
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I like how the rain tasted your face rather than the other way round. Such a playful muse!
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